We had to cut down the speech with Lola (Angela) and Scarlet (PC Brown) as it was taking the most amount of time. We managed to get it to 00:02:30.
But...
It didn't look as great as it should off so I added some cross dissolves, when Scarlet (PC Brown) is saying the phone number to Lola (Angela) and also when Lola (Angela) was saying bye, as it didn't look necessary plus it adds to the effect of suspense.
The hardest bit of editing our thriller was the speech as it was hard to shorten it and have it still make sense to the audience. This part of the edit took us the longest as we wanted it to look as professional as possible.





